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Incrediblebulk

New member

• May 7, 2003

• #1

Sachet any anyone else interested in this online sex ed course for females please practice your craft her.

Sachet has not been able to cyber since her roomates moved in and with her talented writting skills in other areas I was wondering if we could coax a sample from her.

 

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Badgermoon

Guest

• May 7, 2003

• #2

...Prepare the kittens....

 

Sachet

New member

• May 12, 2003

• #3

I'm afraid that would get a lil too steamy even for me! *lmao*
How about if we all do a story, each adding a line wheneva you click on this thread & let's see where it takes us.
It should be fun *winks*
Unlike true cybering, we'll hafta keep our descriptions mild & language somewhat tame.

 

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Incrediblebulk

New member

• May 12, 2003

• #4

Ok I will start. As I look at your avitar I am getting all kinds of motivation! Here goes..............




















Sachet takes a drag of her cigarette and uncrosses her legs making us all wonder whether she has any panties on under that short shinny black skirt..............

 

Sachet

New member

• May 12, 2003

• #5

... but, Sachet just laughs & laughs.. cause she knows whether or not she does

*jumps outta my director's chair*
Where's the build up?! Where's the foreplay?! Where's the story?!
Alright, here we go for REAL.

As the last shade of pink sky turned light grey, Lorrie thought how quickly all the vibrant colors of the sky had changed.
She grasped the front of her sweater as she swung slowly on the porch swing, thinking back to the summer she met her first love, Brett.
Brett was...

 

shiko24

New member

• May 12, 2003

• #6

a tall, dark haired, well built man with a tan and a smile to die for.
As she thought about him, she began running her hands over her chest and then up and behind her neck letting her long hair out of the hair tie as she closed her eyes she remembered the first time they........

 

Sachet

New member

• May 13, 2003

• #7

...caught each other's eye during the summer carnival held in the high school parking lot. The noise from the rides and the aroma of fresh popcorn filled the air.
It sent a chill down her spine & Lorrie shivered as she thought of how the excitement gave her chills as she paid for her ticket to take a ride on the ZIPPER.
She sat in the ride & at the last second, her girlfriend chickened out. It was clear that Lorrie was terribly disappointed that she wouldn't be able to go for the ride, but as she was about to step down, Brett's voice caught her attention.
'I'll ride with you,' he shouted.
He climbed in before she had a chance to protest & slipped his arm around her shoulder.
She blushed instantly & gazed into his beautiful brown eyes and then allowed her gaze slowly drop to his...

 

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WeirdAl

Guest

• May 13, 2003

• #8

hot pink shirt. He was either gay, or color blind. She knew right away which one she was hoping for.

As the ride began, she found herself shivering. She wasn't sure if it was from the excitement of the ZIPPER, or if it was him sitting next to her. She felt like she had to say something, so she asked him...

 

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Badgermoon

Guest

• May 13, 2003

• #9

"What's with the cloak and wizzard hat?"

 

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Incrediblebulk

New member

• May 14, 2003

• #10

He replied, "I just came from the auditions for the school play, I forgot I was still wearing this stupid get up. My mind must have wandered or been distracted by some beautiful girl." Squeezes his arm tight on her shoulder and gives her a quick kiss on the cheek.

Bret knew she was attrated to him and he figured he'd try and send shivers up & down her young curvy spine.

"Let me ask you something" bret said, "do you think a star baseball and football player like me can get even more chicks if I have acting skills", Laughing out loud teasing his young pray because he knows he can have her or just about any of the girls anytime he wants.

 

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Choke03

Guest

• May 14, 2003

• #11

As the ride reaches it's highest point in the sky it suddenly stops, all the lights as far as one can see have gone dark.........

 

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Incrediblebulk

New member

• May 14, 2003

• #12

Just then a loud craklin spark and boom is heard off in the distance of the evening.

 

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Incrediblebulk

New member

• May 14, 2003

• #13

The sound reminded the young carnival riders of lightning and thunder but they knew it was something else...............

 

footballcat

Hardly a Newbie

• May 15, 2003

• #14

so as the ride is stuck at the peak of its hight, brett asks whats her favorite..............