ColdHeartBear
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I am looking for critiques, suggestions for edits and perhaps humor to add to secret agent man.
MC MAG November 2004
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ColdHeartBear
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I'm serious guys. I put the article together from some random notes for a much larger article in less than 1 1/2 hours. I am certain I have made syntax errors and pompousities that need to be corrected but in rereading the article 3 times I was not able to see them. I presume this is the last day to make changes. Please give me suggestions now as I must go to work to catch up on what has to be ready Monday and Tuesday. I will not be back in time to make changes if today is the last day for them.
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ColdHeartBear
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I was wrong. Security made me leave less than 2 hours after I started working.
On the other hand I really have no clue whether what I have submitted is up to the desired quality of the magazine, or even if it is the type of subjects Presser wants as part of his magazine. I saw his suggested (mandatory?) table of contents but I was not able to submit on any of those topics without more time to prepare for them.
On the other hand I really have no clue whether what I have submitted is up to the desired quality of the magazine, or even if it is the type of subjects Presser wants as part of his magazine. I saw his suggested (mandatory?) table of contents but I was not able to submit on any of those topics without more time to prepare for them.
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